Saturday, March 17, 2012

Be Prepared to be Amazed

This story is chapter one of Kevin's dragon story!
Watch out for his incredible use of language!!


The Mystery Has Just Begun
Chapter One
Once upon a time there was a great knight, a peaceful one.  People called that knight the mystical knight.  The land was called Advena, the Land of the Mysterious Dragons.  The dragons weren’t friendly at all.  That’s why they needed knights to fight them off.
One day in Advena a robot dragon shot right down and struck right at the mystical knight’s meditation room, and blasted a flamy fire.  But as fast as lightning the mystical knight dodged it and looked at him, and did a fiery flame back, but the robot dragon flew back up. 
The mystical knight said, “What was that power?  Where did it come from?”
He was thinking someone had made it.  But who?
To be continued.........
Be prepared to read chapter two,
The  Dragon’s End!

4 comments:

  1. You have written a very good first chapter to your story. I can't wait to find out where the power came from.

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  2. WOW! Kevin That is an amazing chapter to the begining of the story but and I can't wait for who did the magical power!

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  3. I like how you said,at the end he was thinking someone had made it. But who?

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