Watch out for his incredible use of language!!
The
Mystery Has Just Begun
Chapter
One
Once upon a time there was a great knight, a peaceful
one. People called that knight the
mystical knight. The land was called
Advena, the Land of the Mysterious Dragons.
The dragons weren’t friendly at all.
That’s why they needed knights to fight them off.
One day in Advena a robot dragon shot right down and
struck right at the mystical knight’s meditation room, and blasted a flamy
fire. But as fast as lightning the
mystical knight dodged it and looked at him, and did a fiery flame back, but
the robot dragon flew back up.
The mystical knight said, “What was that power? Where did it come from?”
Be
prepared to read chapter two,
The Dragon’s End!
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You have written a very good first chapter to your story. I can't wait to find out where the power came from.
ReplyDeleteWOW! Kevin That is an amazing chapter to the begining of the story but and I can't wait for who did the magical power!
ReplyDeleteI like how you said,at the end he was thinking someone had made it. But who?
ReplyDeletecool story Kevin
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